JANUARY FICTION

January 16, 2013 Fiction

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Gerard McHugh January 23, at 22:49

This juxtaposition of the chilling yet exhilharating fall (the "champagne of all falling"), a state of every nerve adrenalized, with the anticipation of Morpheus arms, open and awaiting, with a sanctuary that only His underworld of dreams can offer, is striking enough to cause this reader's heart to skip a beat.
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Honoré January 16, at 14:49

A poignant tale, her soul's fear of falling and yet her desire to embrace sleep... thirst for oblivion, and yet aspiring to immortality - beautiful writing.
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jacqueline dick January 16, at 05:46

Wow, Q! Truly, well written I'm particularly drawn to the wish to fall into Morpheus..perfect description of fear of insomnia...and that final paragraph, for me, is a killer...bringing a strange and magnetic peace. Lovely write...and Congrads!! xoxo
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