darkness~ someone chucked a pinhole camera out an oblong overhead it turned into a firefly- all the light that had been trapped inside- trees grew hungry tentacles there was darkness again and shadows went eavesdropping ©Mohana Das Advertisements Rate this:Share this:Share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)Click to email (Opens in new window)Click to share on Google+ (Opens in new window)MoreClick to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading...
Love the imagery in this. The camera becoming a firefly is beautiful. Thanks for visiting my blog and the comment. It’s a pleasure to meet you 🙂
ha really cool imagery in the pinhole camera becoming a firefly…the shadows and tentacle trees are rather menacing though…
This creates a compelling image in the mind’s eye, from furst to last. The spareness of verses makes the mystery unfold and that much more charming.
A very clever poem. 🙂 I loved it.
Love the imagery in this. The camera becoming a firefly is beautiful.
Thanks for visiting my blog and the comment. It’s a pleasure to meet you 🙂
Thank you so much!
Personified inanimates! Haunting and dramatic!
Beautifully imaginative. I love its flow!
Magic in the twilight time of fireflies!
The last line is simply superb.
lovely, descriptive language & a bit of whimsy – I like that, eavesdropping shadows & all
So cool! I love it. I really like the idea of the pinhole camera as a firefly with light inside.
ha really cool imagery in the pinhole camera becoming a firefly…the shadows and tentacle trees are rather menacing though…
Great imagery and action in this!
beautiful dreamlike poem!
This creates a compelling image in the mind’s eye, from furst to last. The spareness of verses makes the mystery unfold and that much more charming.
I love that last line, Mohana. Thanks for visiting me. It is a pleasure to meet you.
Pamela
Pleasure to meet you too!! 🙂
Wonderful imagery here – thank you.
Anna :o]
marvellous! you take a pin-hole camera, flood it with images, and then explode it in the shadows!
Cool imagery in the pinhole camera becoming a firefly…very lovely!