I DREAM IN BROKEN
By
fragments of memories long forgotten,
my mind’s attempt at foraging
for things I have consciously buried.
It is exhausting, this mental battering
against walls I knowingly built
but do not have the sense to leave
alone. I am a midnight Don Quiote,
storming at metaphoric windmills,
hoping someday to break my own
will, hoping someday to release
the floodgates of the past that made me this way.
MIRROR
By
reflective pool, framed
into blindness. Silver
side of deception’s coin
waivers under intense
scrutiny. Vision’s beauty
is open to vanity’s translation.
I want to respond to your second poem, so exquisitely stark. The ravaging of the flowers, specific and beautiful, parallels the wreckage of a woman's life in a traditional role turned ugly.
This comment is for Ilona Martonfi.