A HYMN FOR THE UPCOMING FALL
By
My grandma used to dance every year
On the white and black grapes
Holding her old dress
And smiling at me,
Me, a first-born
Me, a child of a Zeus
The smart little girl,
And I never dared to join her,
But I watched with curiosity,
And then grandpa would sing
All the beautiful songs
Of his childhood
And the Second World War,
While the wine and the rakiya get fermented,
Mom would come out
With a large amount of sweet pepper
To make the sweetest pindzur
And some fresh fruit for slatko and jam,
Dad and uncle would bring a pig
For a sacrifice to our land,
Even Zeus and Helios would hear
The scream of that pig,
And sense the smell of the wine
Breathe the smell of the jam,
And I, the happy kid,
Running across the old grandma’s yard,
Now a grown up in a fast changing world,
I’m still asking myself…
… where are the days when people worked together?
TO THE HOLY EARTH MOTHER II
By
Six thousand summers,
Oh beautiful woman
Six thousand summers old!
Six thousand times you have grown crops
Six thousand autumns wine was made
Six thousand years the Sun rose above you
Six thousand bloody fights
Six thousand holly nights with prayers
So many gallons of tears
Of our fateful mothers
Who covered their face in black
To be unnoticed
Until their own fate arrives
Six thousand names you bare,
Holy Earth Mother
Your spirit in every man, woman and child
Who define themselves as your children
Give them six thousand lives and deaths
To fight against the spilling of blood,
And receive this song as a gift
On your sixth thousand and first spring
And make my love everlasting for you.
I want to respond to your second poem, so exquisitely stark. The ravaging of the flowers, specific and beautiful, parallels the wreckage of a woman's life in a traditional role turned ugly.
This comment is for Ilona Martonfi.