Poetry

Mariangela, yes It is always a noble thing to do if those who have so much remember to extend beyond themselves to those in need. That said, I see the world offering too little hope to humanity as a whole because unhappiness and injustice are increasing at an alarming rate in many Western Nations now which is only making the planet a more unstable place. Sadly I fear the human race is tearing itself apart as these imbalances continue unabated and the general populations see their material gains or wealth decreasing as the cost of living climbs higher while at the same time the politically powerful and rich are becoming more so each passing year, making for a world of the "haves and have not’s!" I think lack of good leadership and many governments getting more out of touch with the majorities within their populations and mainly serving the interests of the elite while appeasing more and more throngs of indigent within those populations of these Western Nations; all at the expense of the middle class! But so fittingly your writing about “Determination” is very good for all of us to keep in mind especially now in these very difficult societal times because the world is faced with ever increasing challenges, all of which will take great determination on the part of all Nations and peoples! To you my Friend I say keep sharing your thoughts in poetry and add to the chorus of inspiration that is present in the world but needs to expand worldwide so we all remember not to lose hope! God Bless You and Yours!

Thanks a lot for your beautiful words, Raj. I share your hope. Justice must come one day!

They are heart touching mariangela, Loved them! You described so beautifully and yes justice is yet to be served.

Grazie mille, Maria. Apprezzo molto il tuo commento. Credo che occorra sempre sostenere chi soffre a causa di guerre, violenza o carestia. Dobbiamo affermare i nostri valori umani.

Mariangela, I read the poetry and to me they were both very good with descriptive choice of words that convey the emotion and images that are the reality about which you write! “Children” did give me the definite feeling of sadness and great loss in lands that have been for decades overcome with corruption and ravaged by war making them near chaotic! Your feeling at a loss to say anything that can change the situation it did give me a sense of the despair the people living that nightmare must be feeling! “Dedication” was very uplifting to me because as you did describe with your words the value of being dedicated or determined to a cause whether it be out of need to support ones family or be successful reaching a lifelong goal or even just an adventurer who wants to be able to meet a challenge for the sake of overcoming it! But regardless if what we actually achieve is what was our original intent or goal, we must be thankful, fully appreciating what we actually achieve as a blessing and inspiration to always move forward for tomorrow brings new opportunity! The real take away is that the key to success is dedication and just making sure to believe in one's self no matter how bumpy or how many twists and turns or even detours come up on that road to one's personal success! Thank you very much for sharing these poems with me and I hope to see more here as time passes! Many Blessings to You!

Mariangela, aceste poezii oglindesc sentimente minunate ?i încredere în adev?ratele valori umane! Sunt un îndemn pentru oamenii puternici, buni , curajo?i la ac?iuni concrete pentru a face lumea, un loc pu?in mai bun ?i suportabil ?i pentru acele victime ale r?zboaielor ?i nedrept??ilor de tot felul. Sincere felicit?ri! Versurile tale sunt remarcabile!

Mariangela, these poems are both excellent muses, and important in their bolstering good intentions in a world that is often heartless and unjust. Well done!