COILED BABIES
By
I have seen snakes before
far too deadly to explore
I even played and dined with them
with honeyed words and fried pennies
I have seen too, the cash morsels
hanging by the snakes’ pit
feeding the forlorn faces
of their women victims
and I hated myself more
because I cannot save them
for I too, tasted the morsels
served by three hissing cobras
wearing the masks of deceit
cloaked under human faces
far deadlier than the slithering
magical, graceful, mysterious
wonder of the cobra’s neck
opening, spreading and rising
to protect her young, coiled babies.
DON’T WAIT
By
have you tasted
little deaths
after pain
have you felt pain
in laughter
after hate
have you touched hate
in embrace
after rape
then my ragdolls
of abuse
don’t wait.
Dare Devil - so delicate and dainty - and then ouch. My favorite part of the other one, "Her suitcase stuffed with whys Anyone became Someone who left." Both lovely pieces.
Oh thank you so very very much Linda - just found these comments and what a delightful surprise. I am deeply appreciative and delighted that you enjoyed :)
Dare Devil is excellent.
Thank you so very very much for stopping and for commenting. I'm delighted that you enjoyed Dare Devil - i so enjoyed writing her.
Pearl, I adore both of your pieces. "high above layers of simple air" breathes beautifully in the first, and your nod to E.E. Cummings in the second is literally breathtaking. Gorgeous.
Aw De - high praise indeed!!! Thank you so very much - for reading, for commenting so grandly - happy that you enjoyed and took the time to let me know.
Sorry all but my website for poetry is now http://darkercircle.wordpress.com/ . Had to move it as I also write for children. Apologise for any problems this causes.