FEBRUARY POETS

January 31, 2012 Poetry , POETRY / FICTION

PinnedByFeltsensejunkie 

Saddest sight

A butterfly pinned

Her flight stalled

In motion taken

Crimson fade

On royal blue

Flecked sienna burn

Her majesty

Is grace defined

Caught

Her moment true

 

Beauty in the Sieve

By

Feltsensejunkie

Trickled treat

Seasoned not

Honeyed run of fancy

This flighty spin of web

Light on lava melt

Sweet slips

A coat of amber

Shedding pins

Kneading rolls

Beauty in the sieve

Unnecessary

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17 Comments

  1. Michael Allen April 30, at 23:52

    Doesn't it seem there's a revivial in poetry? Not so much with the poets, but with the readers and the listeners? It seems to me that there's a greater audience now in place to appreciate the art.

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    • Administrator April 30, at 23:58

      Yes, I agree with you Michael. Oddly, the very thing we attack for destroying attention spans and polluting an entire generation with illiteracy is in fact, responsible for a sort of renaissance poetically and artistically. As a poet I find the immediacy of this medium a gift but of course curse is that to get to the art you must wade through a few feet of muck. It's lovely to have you here and to read your comment, please visit again.

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  2. Selma February 09, at 01:00

    Hi Elizabeth. I really like your use of water and colour. Your poetry has a vividness that makes the emotion contained in it come to life. Terrific!

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  3. Selma February 08, at 22:30

    Hi Feltsensejunkie. I really like your use of colour. There is a poignancy to your work that is quite moving. Very well done!

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  4. Selma February 08, at 22:29

    Hi Jennifer. An exquisite piece. Delicate, almost ethereal imagery. The sparrow thin wrists provide such a striking image!

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    • Jennifer February 18, at 01:30

      Hi Selma, Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. I am pleased you enjoyed my work.

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  5. Selma February 08, at 22:27

    Hi Marsha. You have just covered two of my favourite subjects - sitting in a tinny and watching a crane. Love both poems. I love the image of the village scurrying at the back of the seabird. That is fantastic!

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  6. Selma February 08, at 22:25

    Hi Steve. You present very powerful images. Your poetry has a great impact. Really like the line - 'the Dove has hope encased in his thin black collar.' Oh, yes.

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  7. Selma February 08, at 22:23

    Hi Jessica. Beautiful work. 'And Speak of Shadows' is just glorious. And I can relate to your 'Occupy' poem...

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    • Jessica February 13, at 16:09

      Hi Selma, thank you kindly! My first comment :)

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  8. Selma February 08, at 22:21

    Hi, Guy. I really like your poetry. Your image of the turquoise water between exposed rocks is just gorgeous. Very, very nice!

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  9. swichman February 07, at 05:34

    Lovely words..........for me they create paintings. Great to read your work here!

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