PinnedByFeltsensejunkie
Saddest sight
A butterfly pinned
Her flight stalled
In motion taken
Crimson fade
On royal blue
Flecked sienna burn
Her majesty
Is grace defined
Caught
Her moment true
Beauty in the Sieve
By
Trickled treat
Seasoned not
Honeyed run of fancy
This flighty spin of web
Light on lava melt
Sweet slips
A coat of amber
Shedding pins
Kneading rolls
Beauty in the sieve
Unnecessary
Doesn't it seem there's a revivial in poetry? Not so much with the poets, but with the readers and the listeners? It seems to me that there's a greater audience now in place to appreciate the art.
Yes, I agree with you Michael. Oddly, the very thing we attack for destroying attention spans and polluting an entire generation with illiteracy is in fact, responsible for a sort of renaissance poetically and artistically. As a poet I find the immediacy of this medium a gift but of course curse is that to get to the art you must wade through a few feet of muck. It's lovely to have you here and to read your comment, please visit again.
Hi Elizabeth. I really like your use of water and colour. Your poetry has a vividness that makes the emotion contained in it come to life. Terrific!
Hi Feltsensejunkie. I really like your use of colour. There is a poignancy to your work that is quite moving. Very well done!
Hi Jennifer. An exquisite piece. Delicate, almost ethereal imagery. The sparrow thin wrists provide such a striking image!
Hi Selma, Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. I am pleased you enjoyed my work.
Hi Marsha. You have just covered two of my favourite subjects - sitting in a tinny and watching a crane. Love both poems. I love the image of the village scurrying at the back of the seabird. That is fantastic!
Hi Steve. You present very powerful images. Your poetry has a great impact. Really like the line - 'the Dove has hope encased in his thin black collar.' Oh, yes.
Hi Jessica. Beautiful work. 'And Speak of Shadows' is just glorious. And I can relate to your 'Occupy' poem...
Hi Selma, thank you kindly! My first comment :)
Hi, Guy. I really like your poetry. Your image of the turquoise water between exposed rocks is just gorgeous. Very, very nice!
Thank you selma, very happy to hear that.
Lovely words..........for me they create paintings. Great to read your work here!