DAD’S FINE
By
Dad’s fine.
He doesn’t want to see you.
He’s warm and brave
and immobile – caught between words.
He rests comfortably in his room.
The doctor shaved his head.
Dad likes this doctor,
describing his humour as ‘elegant’.
The doctor cut into dad’s skull
with a small circular saw.
Dad smiled through it all, syllables suspended,
should he wince, the needles adjust.
Inside dad’s brain, the doctor
had clamps, gauze, cotton and blood.
No pain. The brain knows no physical pain.
Completed,
the doctor proclaimed a profound success.
The portion of skull replaced;
scalp stitched into place –
everything tidied up.
Dad’s fine.
He doesn’t want to see you.
Dad doesn’t know who you are …
anymore.
THE FOREST’S BIOGRAPHY
By
The buildings are all
sleeping on crutches,
but the feelings of the forest are awake –
deeper than rivers forgotten and forgiving;
dearer than flowers and buoyant wild bushes;
clear as the music of birds.
The buildings are all
stuck in shadows and cement,
but the forest is light –
bright like the fur on bees;
of foxes shining in the snow;
deer coming and going at will.
The buildings are all
without emotion or movement ,
but the sails of the forest
are open and green –
every branch is a friend;
leaves uncurling – pleased to be pleased.
VAMPIRES
By
We live in the fleshy dark
of our thousand-flower curse,
as the petals – our children,
fall from the bloom to their fate.
We weep blood – blood
shed through lost generations
and we grieve like the shadows
that give birth to words.
We possess the night, our realm,
pursuing the destiny we so desire,
with the strength of poetry –
moths in earnest drawn by the flame …
until the morning devours us
and we become light.



October 15th, 2012
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@ marsha
THE SMILING LINE
Nothing but the sea
All along the look
That stands clear and wide
As it always is
Nothing but the sea
Under the rock
Where birds are breathing
Like the sound of a tear
Sons of dragons
Riding on dolphins
Ghost archers of the wind
Telling tales of the unexpected
@marsha
THE SMILING LINE
Nothing but the sea
All along the look
That stands clear and wide
As it always is
Nothing but the sea
Under the rock
Where birds are breathing
Like the sound of a tear
Sons of dragons
Riding on dolphins
Ghost archers of the wind
Telling tales of the unexpected
OMG .. love these! This line sticks with me, “the doctor, sushi
for lunch.” Perfect!
Yes, packs a punch – directly to the heart of all women. Wonderful writing.
These are both lovely. The first one captured EXACTLY that feeling – plop!
Wonderful poems! It’s like a quilt of memories, all composing a very special piece.
Two absolutely wonderful & extremely powerful poems ~*
Laurie, these are just excellent, each of their own poignant power…but together: WOW.
Excellent work. I especially like the first one, Laurie. I like the transitions in it.