Poets for July : Richard Fenwick, Cheryl D Faison, Emmanuel Sibanda, Laurie Kolp and Peycho Kanev
Halfway Point
By
She dips an oar from an ash canoe
into the lake’s dark surface,
pulls herself toward its center
to push away the past, or
future, or even tonight’s moon.
A fish leaps, concentric circles,
two small branches drift to shore
as her oar cuts deep into the skin
of water, the lake’s thin flesh.
Resting it against her thighs,
she glides until each ripple fades,
and wonders if she should return
to their small white dock
or complete the lonely journey
to the cottage on the other side.
Geography
By
In anticipation of my birthday,
I’ve decided not to scratch my head
searching for perfect nouns, verbs
to fill an empty space on a page.
I won’t worry about modifiers
or similes that refuse to settle in,
or the scolded child of passive voice.
No, today I will sit to admire
the prints on this wall, the map
posted over my cluttered desk
with its question mark of Africa,
its blue seahorse of Japan,
the stingray and its tail made
from the Aleutians and Alaska.
This is where I’ll wait
for my birth hour, which arrives
each year like summer gossip
to promise ten more winters,
an abundance of more gray hair.
I will leave it all behind
to read Whitman or Paz, perhaps
a bit of George Bilgere,
and after we share a sandwich
with Dutch or Belgian beer,
I’ll return alone to my map
where my mouth always waters
as I taste the bone-in ribeye
that is always South America.
Agree with many of the comments above - would add there is an ethereal quality to the flow of your words that gives one the impression that they are being heard rather than read - which is quite lovely. Beautiful pieces:)
Oh yes! Both excellent, Laurie! Glad I dropped in. Thanks for sharing these. :-)
Two wonderful pieces, Richard. I love the mystery of Halfway Point, and the humor in Geography. I'd like to more of your work.
The Costume just achieves the perfect mood. Wow!
Thanks for your kind comments and wonderful support... it means so much to me!
Very nice pieces Richard. The flow and meter were soothing and the words filled in as texture. Good to see your poems continue to reach ever more appreciative readers.
I love how your day unfolded and we can hear your thoughts. They dance with the ordinary is extracted with fragments of your emotions. The disconnect and connects all stirred through your view~ Wonderful! Congrats Laurie :D
Laurie such a gift you have for visceral images and outstanding prose. Such beautifully layered stanzas, I delight in reading them again and again. Wonderful!
Laurie, like your repetition in The Costume--"sit and sip and sew" so sublime!
Great pair, Laurie. This is one aspect of poetry that I have little talent for. I can't quite seem to get down what it takes to do interpersonal encounters. You've definitely shown marvelous examples of how it's done well. Thank you.
Laurie, these are wonderful. I love the ferocity of The Costume, ending with this soothing rhythm: "I smile, sip my coffee sit and sip and sew–." ...the demon having been exorcised, for now. :) Also love the double play in the title. And the tenderness, appreciation in That Look. Wonderful. Love your work. So happy to see it here.
Love them both, Laurie, but especially this one. Nice work, as always.