Why Do You Say
By
Why do you say that it is
So great?
Or sing it praises
So outwardly clear?
You know that it’s not
With the slightest of ease
Such a torment to hold
And behold.
Thinking on air to lovingly seek
What others hold
trifling so.
To live in the now but for
Others here,
That they may never see it
As such.
Yet still you do say that it is
So great,
And sing it praises
More ravishing.
And still do you know
That it’s not worth the slight.
Winds
By
There is a hush that fills the silence of the world.
It is quiet and my stomach lurches at this deed,
This woeful task, haunting me as the steps echo
Their orderly pattern down the path,
Where not a sound is heard but the constant pitting and patting,
Which quiets the silence and hovers over the blankets of the non-believers,
Who leave a mess of folds fixated on the neatness of
Softly falling,
Gently calling,
White masks, to lay the earth to rest.
Quiet in its sleep does the land lay about,
And does not disturb the shadows in their lengthy slumber.
Those who wake them, dare
To disturb what has been long awaited and strived for by a drench of tears.
Not the tears for labors sake,
Nor the cries for what will be missed,
But relief and loss of strife,
And welcome of the warm snowy blanket,
Which by unfortunate mishap,
Has been covered,
And tarnished by the unwanted folds of the mess of hidden attempt
In themselves, but all it is, in truth,
Nonetheless, is pity un-shown?
And thrown,
To build up their insides in time for the harshness of the
Howling, scowling,
Glowering, blustery
Winds.
Hi Michael, your poems were excellent. The power of the 'Eve factor' can't be denied. Very well said!
Hello Selma, Thanks for appreciating my Poem.
Hi Robert, beautiful, beautiful imagery - "blues plunging into viridian" - WOW. I love that. Bravo!
Hi John, 'Escapes From The Ordinary' really stood out for me. I like everyday life as subject matter. You can do so much with it. The image of the milk being poured down the drain is a striking one!
Hi A.J. You've got some FAB images in your poems. I love - "Throw a wish to the wind. And I will save it in a can." as well as - "A hand I have never met snaps a shutter against the moon." Brilliant!
HI Teresa, I particularly like your poem 'Winds' - it is very powerful. Thank you.
Hi Fiona, Just wanted to say I enjoyed both of your poems very much. I can relate to 'Sifting For Gold' a lot. Your final stanza is so apt.
Hi Ian, your depiction of the enduring story of Pierrot and Columbine was quite moving. It tugged at my heart that he was broken and that no one had pity for him. A tale of woe, indeed.
Hi Liam, I really liked your poems, in particular 'This Town.' The rhythm of it made it read like a song. I can relate to the line: " She asked how we’re going to get out of here," Oh yeah!
Hi Ilona, just wanted to say I thought both of your poems were excellent. There is a bleak kind of beauty contained in both of them. The one about the fisherman really got to me. I was greatly affected in an emotional sense by the oil spill in the Gulf. I don't think I'll ever get over it. Thank you for your profound images.
Hi Selma, thank you for the kind words. Hope your summer was great. Cheers, Ilona
Prmtime Guy and Sifting for Gold are two of the most beautiful and interesting poems I have read in a long time.
Beautiful poems. The March showcase is full of life and I love Michael's mood of capturing beauty in a dancing array of peace.