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  1. Heather Grace Stewart
    May 13, 2012

    Thanks for the kind comments everyone.

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  2. Neva Flores
    May 2, 2012

    Brilliant poetry, so good to read you here.

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    • blackswanpoetry
      May 13, 2012

      Thank you Neva 🙂

      Reply

  3. poetryroad
    May 2, 2012

    This is awesome! Great job!!!!!

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    • blackswanpoetry
      May 13, 2012

      thank you so much.

      Reply

  4. Ronald Fischman
    May 2, 2012

    Andrew’s retelling of the feminine ritual could come right out of The Feminine Mystique. The question is ownership. If the daughter owns her body, men, and other women, will love it and want to merge with it. If a man or woman owns his or her sexuality as a lifelong gift, it can last for decades.

    Obviously, the poet succeeded in evoking a collision of worlds and spheres.

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    • blackswanpoetry
      May 13, 2012

      Thank you Andrew for your comment. I love to see where my pieces are taken by the reader.

      Reply

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